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That smile HAUNTS me,
in my DREAMS...

HE'S taunting me,
or so it seems...

WHY can't i RUN?
"where would you go?"

YOU'RE hiding SOMEPLACE...
"that may be so..."

If I flee,
HE will give chase.

In my MIND,
i see HIS face...

an eerie LAUGH,
a far-off distance...

"How foolish to try and FIGHT
with RESISTANCE."

out of the shadows,
HE appears...

personifying
all my FEARS...

those claws reach out,
HE holds me tight...

within that instant,
I feel him BITE...

HIS cold, wet tounge
against my skin...

my BODY stiffens,
the fangs sink in.

He laps my blood
SILENTLY...

I feel a sense of
ECSTASY...

with all the PAIN,
comes a great PLEASURE

almost impossible
to MEASURE...

He sets me free,
BUT holds me still...

down my spine,
I feel a CHILL...

The demon LICKS,
and leaves his MARK.

I close my eyes,
as all goes DARK...
DEMONGO POEM MADE FOR: *umbreongirl :heart:

totally inspired by her sexy pics and fanfic...:oops:

she had the idea that in an 'altered reality'...:evileyes:

HE could be a "vampire"...DON'T ask...JUST LOVE...:horny:

as for WHO the VICTIM is...well...i'll let YOU decide! :lick:


KEATON. i miss you. DAMMIT, I'M FEELING DEPRESSED.:X



POEM (c) me : =ANDREAc :halfliquid:
Demongo (c) Tartakovsky :fuzzydemon:
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:iconalannatheseedrian:
alannatheseedrian Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
<3
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:icondemonja:
Demonja Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012
this is the best demongo pic and poem i know
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ObscurusVII Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice ^^

That gave me the chills.
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FlargahBlargh Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
tHIS IS SO COOL! 10000000000000/5!!!!!!!!!!!
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wallflower-chan Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2009
WOW. as someone who has always sucked arse at poetry, i can really appreciate how amazing this is. i love it darling. the rhymes are really great without being at all cheesy.

keep on keepin on :o

<3
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Splrix Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2009
awesome! I really like this poem! :D
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ANDREAc Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2009   Digital Artist
MANY THANKS, FIONA! :omg:

ahh, you are too kind! :happycry:
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:iconsplrix:
Splrix Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2009
You're very welcome :hug:
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:iconfudgymaniac:
fudgymaniac Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2009
That's some good stuff up there :clap: Scary :D You're very good with words :)
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:iconandreac:
ANDREAc Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2009   Digital Artist
thankyou, darling dearest!:blowkiss:

aww, i always try my best... :aww:
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:iconila92:
Ila92 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2009
Wow! ** very beautiful, both picture and poetry!
The poetry could even fit Twilight XD
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:iconandreac:
ANDREAc Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2009   Digital Artist
sorry to say, i can't stand those books! :bleh:

aww...anyways, thankyou sweetheart! ^^;
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:iconila92:
Ila92 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2009
XDDDDD I'm trying to finish the last book XD but I'm not a very obsessed Twilighter -.-" I just like it, but normally... and I must say that since it became famous, after and before the movie, I didn't like it anymore.
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KiaraLPhoenix Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Frightening, but so enchanting! It makes me blush and it sends a chill down my spine at the same time!!!
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:icontifa-the-strange:
Tifa-the-Strange Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009
:drool:


Demongo
will
ALWAYS
be a vamp

:iconpervplz:
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:iconandreac:
ANDREAc Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2009   Digital Artist
TRUE-THAT, L0VE!:iconnosebleedplz:
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KiraDrakken24 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009
...Whoa mama. *shaking* Is it okay if I think the person is you? It honestly seems fitting...however, Jack is still human from the neck down, so that's entirely possible. I actually think that vampire biting is creepy...almost queasy creepy. But the way you wrote it just made it seem a whole lot more...what's the word? Sexy! ^^ Love it! Ooh, check out my journal, too! I have something neat to tell you! I'm gonna go type a new entry right now!
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ANDREAc Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2009   Digital Artist
OH, WHICHEVER WAY YOU CHOOSE, i don't mind at all! :D

DEMONGO can take ADVANTAGE of MORE than ONE person...:fear:

Ohoho! GLAD you think it's SEXY! thankyou so much, sweetheart! :nod:

MmmHmm, alrighty then! sure thing, i'll check it out! *GL0MPTACKLES* :clap:
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donna626 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009
Oooooohh, spooky! :fear::D

Somehow, as SOON as I started reading this I started thinking Jack was the victim; does that make sense? :O :?

BTW, you'd make a great poet!! ;) :+fav:
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ANDREAc Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009   Digital Artist
OH. ACTUALLY, YES! (that's who i had in mind, writing it) :work:

i'm GLAD you were able to CATCH that! MAJOR THANKS, LOVE! :groucho:

Spo0o0o0oky things...are my "specialty"! Hahaha! HAPPY you ENJOYED it! :writersblock:
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:icondonna626:
donna626 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009
Yay! My instincs were right! :boogie:

Oh believe me, with that kind of talent I'll bet you could write a horror novel in less an a week! :D Keep up the amazing work, girl!!:#1:
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ANDREAc Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2009   Digital Artist
i shall continue to do my best! :typerhappy:

thankyou once again, dearest! :crazy:
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shreksgoldfish Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009
Ooh Hoo Hoo! Thats good. It sent pleasent shivers up my spine.
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:iconandreac:
ANDREAc Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009   Digital Artist
i'm HAPPY to HEAR that! :typerhappy:

i love other's 'reactions'!!! :crazy:

thankyou, my darling dear! :dance:
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shreksgoldfish Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009
You are very welocme >D
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JackSkellingtonsGal Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009
That was fantastically SPOOKY love. :heart:

You're a very good poet. :iconblushingplz:
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:iconandreac:
ANDREAc Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009   Digital Artist
thankyou, sweetheart! :nirvana:

ahh, you are too kind! :flirty:
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:iconjackskellingtonsgal:
JackSkellingtonsGal Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2009
You are most welcome. :iconlovepurpleplz:

Well you deserve the praise. :iconiluplz: ^w^
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midnatheshadowdemon Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow! just wow! hey you didn't gave me the link of it yet.

its awesome dear!

poor love *hugs you* I hope you will feel better :(
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ANDREAc Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009   Digital Artist
when she comes back, then we can be crazy T0GETHER! :love:

SIS, you've really been CHEERING me up, ya know? :slow:

THANKY0U S0 MUCH for THAT! *glomptackles* :dead:

yeah! i'll send you the link, of course!!! :reading:
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midnatheshadowdemon Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
YEAH! of course! :P

awesome.. but I wish I could come by your side and take care of U! :O

yay! I can't wait to read it :P
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darkruler64 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
That's....deep.....*passes out*

You could be an immense poet, my friend;)
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ANDREAc Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009   Digital Artist
i write poems all the time, actually...little 'songs', too...:hmm:

i just don't know how many people like them, though! :faint:

aww, thankyou my dear friend! please don't pass-out! *HUG* :XD:
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ybfan666 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009
Whoo!! That gave me chills!! But it was amazing, Andrea!! ^_^
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:iconandreac:
ANDREAc Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009   Digital Artist
HAPPY to hear it had that "effect"! :nirvana:

thankyou kindly, HAYLEY! *glomp* :star:
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Duong4189 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009
It's beautiful...:aww:

But it chills my spine. :cling:
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:iconandreac:
ANDREAc Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009   Digital Artist
THANKY0U, R0SE! :omg:

Hahaha! oh, i'm sorry! :upset:

i'm pleased to hear it, though! :happycry:
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:iconduong4189:
Duong4189 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009
In a good way! :noes:

You're welcome!
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:iconandreac:
ANDREAc Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009   Digital Artist
:iconiluplz:
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:iconduong4189:
Duong4189 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009
Do you have a link to the episode he's in luv? :confused:

I search him on YOUTUBE but I couldn't find even a clip. :noes:
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ANDREAc Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2009   Digital Artist
Haha, yeah. you WON'T find it on YOUTUBE...:dead:

someone posted it before...but it got taken down...:doh:

Mmm, i'm thinking to UPLOAD it someplace else, though! :salute:
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Duong4189 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2009
Alert me when you do! :noes:
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:iconandreac:
ANDREAc Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2009   Digital Artist
i'll be sure to post a journal! :bookdiva:

so, don't worry, sweetheart! :giggle:
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