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That smile HAUNTS me,
in my DREAMS...

HE'S taunting me,
or so it seems...

WHY can't I RUN?
"where would you go?"

YOU'RE hiding
someplace
"that may be so."

If I flee,
HE will give chase.

In my MIND,
I see HIS face...

An eerie LAUGH,
a far-off distance...

"How foolish to FIGHT
with RESISTANCE."

out of the shadows,
HE appears...

Personifying
all my FEARS...

those claws reach out,
HE holds me tight...

within that instant,
I feel him BITE...

HIS cold, wet tongue
against my skin...

my BODY stiffens,
the fangs sink in.

He laps my blood
SILENTLY...

I feel a sense of
ECSTASY...

with all the PAIN,
comes a great PLEASURE

Almost impossible
to MEASURE...

He sets me free,
BUT holds me still...

down my spine,
I feel a CHILL...

The demon LICKS,
and leaves his MARK.

I close my eyes,
as all goes DARK...
inspired by the idea that in an 'alternate reality'
 
HE could be a "vampire". DON'T ASK WHY. JUST LOVE.



POEM (c) me : ANDREAc 
Demongo (c) Tartakovsky  
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I-Am-The-Fall Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Well he DOES have those teeth...
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alannatheseedrian Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
<3
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Demonja Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012
this is the best demongo pic and poem i know
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ObscurusVII Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice ^^

That gave me the chills.
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FlargahBlargh Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
tHIS IS SO COOL! 10000000000000/5!!!!!!!!!!!
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wallflower-chan Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2009
WOW. as someone who has always sucked arse at poetry, i can really appreciate how amazing this is. i love it darling. the rhymes are really great without being at all cheesy.

keep on keepin on :o

<3
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Splrix Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2009
awesome! I really like this poem! :D
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Splrix Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2009
You're very welcome :hug:
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fudgymaniac Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2009
That's some good stuff up there :clap: Scary :D You're very good with words :)
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Ila92 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2009
Wow! ** very beautiful, both picture and poetry!
The poetry could even fit Twilight XD
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Ila92 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2009
XDDDDD I'm trying to finish the last book XD but I'm not a very obsessed Twilighter -.-" I just like it, but normally... and I must say that since it became famous, after and before the movie, I didn't like it anymore.
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KiaraLPhoenix Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Frightening, but so enchanting! It makes me blush and it sends a chill down my spine at the same time!!!
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Tifa-the-Strange Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009
:drool:


Demongo
will
ALWAYS
be a vamp

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KiraDrakken24 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009
...Whoa mama. *shaking* Is it okay if I think the person is you? It honestly seems fitting...however, Jack is still human from the neck down, so that's entirely possible. I actually think that vampire biting is creepy...almost queasy creepy. But the way you wrote it just made it seem a whole lot more...what's the word? Sexy! ^^ Love it! Ooh, check out my journal, too! I have something neat to tell you! I'm gonna go type a new entry right now!
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donna626 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009
Oooooohh, spooky! :fear::D

Somehow, as SOON as I started reading this I started thinking Jack was the victim; does that make sense? :O :?

BTW, you'd make a great poet!! ;) :+fav:
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donna626 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009
Yay! My instincs were right! :boogie:

Oh believe me, with that kind of talent I'll bet you could write a horror novel in less an a week! :D Keep up the amazing work, girl!!:#1:
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shreksgoldfish Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009
Ooh Hoo Hoo! Thats good. It sent pleasent shivers up my spine.
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shreksgoldfish Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009
You are very welocme >D
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JackSkellingtonsGal Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009
That was fantastically SPOOKY love. :heart:

You're a very good poet. :iconblushingplz:
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JackSkellingtonsGal Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2009
You are most welcome. :iconlovepurpleplz:

Well you deserve the praise. :iconiluplz: ^w^
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midnatheshadowdemon Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow! just wow! hey you didn't gave me the link of it yet.

its awesome dear!

poor love *hugs you* I hope you will feel better :(
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midnatheshadowdemon Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
YEAH! of course! :P

awesome.. but I wish I could come by your side and take care of U! :O

yay! I can't wait to read it :P
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darkruler64 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
That's....deep.....*passes out*

You could be an immense poet, my friend;)
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ybfan666 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009
Whoo!! That gave me chills!! But it was amazing, Andrea!! ^_^
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Duong4189 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009
It's beautiful...:aww:

But it chills my spine. :cling:
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Duong4189 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009
In a good way! :noes:

You're welcome!
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Duong4189 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009
Do you have a link to the episode he's in luv? :confused:

I search him on YOUTUBE but I couldn't find even a clip. :noes:
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Duong4189 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2009
Alert me when you do! :noes:
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